Poem -
mirror mirror on the wall
comparison
drives us to do insane things.
beauty.
can be a dangerous weapon.
mirror mirror on the wall
words.
might seem to hurt...
actions.
don't compare to words.
mirror, mirror, on the wall
hate.
comes in many sizes.
mirror mirror on the wall...
comparison
can help us work together.
beauty.
we all have it.
mirror mirror on the wall
words.
can join us together.
actions.
show that you care.
hate.
is too strong of a word.
mirror mirror on the wall
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Comments
Mirrors do not gives benefit to the (inner) mirrors.....deep poem.
i'm sorry i didn't see your comment until today Ebrahim, i agree, mirrors can't satisfy what's inside, they only make you want more, and more, and more.
thank you for reading my poem!
:D
thank you, kind of a deep comment in itself! :D
i think mirrors only allow us to see what we wish we couldn't see, and you'll never have the ability to look beneath your surface if you only see a mirror. they don't let us see anything worth seeing, only the bits, and pieces that we wish were there!
thanks for reading, and liking!
Great poem, Joya.
Everything is about looks, which is too bad, because a lot of people miss some wonderful human beings because of it.
Great write.
Matthew.
thank you Matthew, the world we live in is unfair, everything is about looks, and your completely right, we miss out on the funny, or sweet, personalities because their looks cast them aside.
thank you for reading my poem!
:D
You're welcome, and you're wonderful, Joya.
Thank YOU for the great read!
So nice to meet you.
Matthew.
haha, not quite sure about wonderful... i just write what's on my mind.
thank YOU for reading my poem!
it's really nice to know you.
joya
p.s... did you see how my comment is almost the same as yours? i tried to copy it exactly
:D
Hi Joya,
You're so funny, my friend, I did notice your comment.
You're too cool...and silly. I like it!
TTYS,
Matthew.
hey matthew,
i like how you call everyone "my friend" it just makes things less awkward. i also like how i can talk to you, and say "hey matthew" instead of just thanking you for the comment. i don't really agree with being too cool, just kind of cool, more like chilly... and definitely silly, teachers put me in timeout for being silly, and i'm trying to work on it.
i will definitely talk to you later long as your not completely scared by me lol
:D
Hello Mi Amigo(bilinguality is my middle name...my parents were thinking about Bob, or Ted, but decided on Bilinguality...it's kind of embarrassing).
I'm not scared of you at all, my friend. I really enjoy people, especially silly ones, like yourself, and I'm looking so forward to talking to you.
Yay! A new friend! (Note: the people who scare me are the ones who are wicked standoffish, and scared by my being nice to them).
You are just the right amount of cool, young lady!
Great to meet you!
Matthew.
thank you, and thank you very much mr. bilinguality, that's quite a middle name... :D
i guess the scary kind are the wicked, but your so nice i'm not sure people would be scared of you!
:DDDD