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!!!! Botched !!!!

!!!! Botched !!!!

“Everything will go as contrived rest assure,
A typical statement from a surgeon whether Local or offshore.
Plastic surgery is at its surge,
Do extensive research I pleadingly urge. ”

“Dictionary has a concise meaning of deformity as “malfunction”
Who are we racing against at this fragile junction?
Terminology is easy to find,
Plastic Means ‘plastic’ , how  
can we be folded blind.”

“Before you plunge into this Enthralling bet,
Two words- Botched Surgeries-quickly search on the internet.
Traumatising and heart wrenching is the sight of every face they mutilate,
Irreversible is this change,  didnt the surgeon confirm this while hooking you up as bait”l?”

”Sue them,bash them, talk to media to have your  blood earned money retracted,
The allurements seemed so appeasing, from all ends they said,you were well protected.
Ofcourse this is now your responsibility solely?
A contract you did sign and  decision was yours wholly.”

“One botched surgery follows another,
Options are narrowly limited, my sister or brother.
Futile and outrageous is this whole gimmick of infusing chemicals atrociously,
Both money lenders and money makers must be reprimanded ferociously.”

“ A surgeon must base his practice on grounds legit and ethical,
A job done for medical reasons sounds perfectly practical.
Tampering of a body part is an infringement of Gods Decree,
Get your research right, as its better to be safe than sorry.”

“Never disregard this....
“ LESS IS MORE”
Abstain from the wicked knife until you are sure,
If not fully convinced, please seek advice,
Life is yours , I am merely a voice.”

 

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Tony Taylor

AMAZING poetic advice dear poet brother!!...... the fact that you can convey poetically the complicated issue & terminology involved in "Botched Surgeries" is to be applauded!! ???......shining a light on this subject matter should also be applauded because it definitely needs it!!...... The false advertising involved in the promise of 'lasting beauty' for those who are on the fence about spending their life savings on something that may or may not give a client what they're looking for is atrocious and completely irresponsible for a profession that prides itself on honesty!!...... what you've created here is a magnificent testament to the power of poetry and words in general.... it would be a great thing if you could get this poem on the sides od buses and buildings all over the country!!.....PINNED this one my friend!!...... great work!!..... your friend and admirer!!......T xo ?✴❤

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Charu Shaawd

Hey Tony, 
Thank you my dear for your time to read this one and leaving such lovely feedback ?
It kills me to the T seeing every other person scammed by these supposedly cosmetic surgeons. Teenagers are increasingly being allured and targeted which is a shame.These surgeons are undertrained, have tampered credentials. 
Their sole purpose is monetary gain. 
I get people have reasons to go under the knife,however if they haven’t researched enough and the surgery goes wrong, there is no looking back. We mustn’t put our happiness and tranquility at stake for these Superficial momentary gains.
i am totally not against reconstructive surgery done for the right reasons. 
This is a sensitive yet critical topic and I felt Its my social responsibility to do my bit by atleast expressing and putting my point across. Thats the least I can donI guess. 
Glad you liked it !!!!
Ty
Charu ( Mrs )?

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Charu Shaawd

Hey dear Cherie
how is it going?
Thank you so much for reading, commenting and appreciating this one.
So true, God created us all uniquely and we shouldnt go against Gods creation.I hope good sense prevails and we can realise that eventually outward appearance will fade as what remains is our inner beauty. 
thanks again, have a good day xxx?

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Larry Ran

Dear Charu,

So many unsatisfied people
Seek to change their given looks
With plastic surgerie's reshaping
They read about in books

.
So they go to see a surgeon
Who promises them the World
Lips real full and succulent
A nose no longer curled

.
Some of them are lucky
Their operation goes just swell
But many get really "Botched" up
And live in sorrow's Hell

Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
 

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Charu Shaawd

Hi Larry
what a stunning way of commenting ??
thank you !!!
best regards ?

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Larry Ran

Dear Charu,

It is always my pleasure responding to wonderful poetry poetically.  Their powerful words are always the guiding craft of my pen.

Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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GREG TUCKER THE...

So should I get a nose Job?  Lol 
Love the poem.  Great awareness write

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