Poem - 16 November 2018, 04:28

Breakthrough... Please?

Eden Van der Nest

Breakthrough... Please?

A poem here, a poem there
Thinking, wishing it would go somewhere!
I push, I write
But alas!
My plight
Seems I just can't get it right!
Some please love it
Some please take a look
I still have bigger dreams
Like writing a book!
Believe in me
Coach me please
I so wish this was a breeze
Take a chance on me
And the best I'll be
Give me little and Ill return much
You'll see!

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