Poem -
Breath of Air
With every breath of air I can feel the earth move below me
My eyes see the beauty around me and my ears hear the sound that gives life
With every breath I take, I hold your hand in mine, praying for everlasting time
My heart is weak but I won't give up hope for tomorrow that  I just might see
See you again in the heavens light, where we can fly and love does not die
With every breath of air, I bring you nearer to me, an everlasting love
We will be together in song, as peace brings us near to the heavens gates above
With every breath of air, I breathe it for the love of you
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Good shit! lol i really like this piece.. great job!
lol, you really did make me laugh with this comment! Hope you are doing well, did you see that I wrote my first short story, well at least my first short story as an adult.
My next one will be a take off to this Willows of Alabama Tremble, granite it's fiction but not really, next one will be about Rosetta? What do you think, my imagination seems to go crazy at times, but I LOVE it!!
Take Care!
Nanc
very nice x
Thanks Susan, How is Ireland today? I would love to visits some day!
Have a Good One!
Nancy
Nancy,
This was well composed and with an emotion of full warmth that only a woman could have entrusted, it was as if a dream of a better tomorrow, for one whom had only today to have left to live.A poem when eyes are closed places you upon a cloud, just as your accompanied image on your back, gently floating to the heavens above, without a care in the world....Great way to place a person there and in a mind of serenity and at ease..
Kindest regards,
JimÂ
Jim-
You know how to read my work, that is how I felt when I wrote it, floating to the heavens!
Nancy
Nancy,
You placed it out there in such a way, that he feelings of how you felt, was passed on through invitation to your readers.....And relaxation, was their reward for acceptance...This would be a great piece of work to meditate from and in all aspects, you described in this poem, that which i champion myself on doing, every night before i lay,(Meditation).....Out of body experience affect....Wonderful poem of sincere feelings....
Take Care,
JimÂ
Great poem!
Broke -
Thank you!!
Nancy