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Breaths you were breathing.

Broken promises made of deep apprehension,Β  oh my heart conveyed no sin, yet felt as if by breaths you were breathingΒ 
you let that darkness in,

I know what forged the very soul
Your desire meeting with her eyes
A broken promise left me with
grey un living skies,

No amount of rain clouds could keep thee satisfied,Β  upon the shelter rearranged,Β  Β I longed to be insideΒ 

Yet you left me abandond alone in love , the falling down
- with little more, but broken pride,
and pieces on the ground.Β 

Β 

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Richard Waters

" Who doesn't ? " Want to expand " horizons ? Then, get involved. Throw caution, to the " wind " of change, on the " blower " as well as in the " shower " ! The rainy day, not just grey, but, perceived differently. To, be a chance to experiment, with life. Or, some thing encompassing its broad range of options ? Of, that you are assured, within a degree of adequate separation, to invite the long-distance overview. With, its intimate consideration. For, desiring more, than usually is the case. The DISCERNING CONNOUSIEUR, once the " sewer rat " chomping on the " fat, of the land " to " bring home the bacon. "Β  To, generous acclaim ? If, like-minded souls concur. And, refer to your methodology, with reasonable deliberation.
Perhaps, foretelling of " invasive " remedial " DIVERGENCE " when forward-planning, ordains the ordeal, as well as " The Seal " of approval. Before, diversity and variety. Based, on LIBERTY. With, " the bell " sounding proudly, for wanton needs. To, be content, with where you find yourself. Even, in peculiar times. Leaving, you in " The Fog " of " The Outpost " when anything can go on. And, probably does !!! To, effect proceedings. The search for more, rejecting stereotypes. Clearly.
Thrust yourself, into energy, into mechanisms, to generate " Re-animator " philosophy. FOR, THE SAKE OF GETTING SURPLUS. Out, of it !!!
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