Poem -
Bubbles and Sunflowers
Poem written with the prompt pic provided by my very good friend Sarfraz Ahmed 😁
In the lazy summer sun
Wild sunflowers kiss floating bubbles
Merrily dancing in the air
As I lay my hands out
To pop in mid air
I feel the warm summer breeze
And the tingling of sunflower petals
Beneath my fingers
I am filled with wild yellow blossom
Feeling as bright and alive
As the field that I'm in
Pratibha Savani © 2020
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Hi P,
How fresh - as though I'm there
with you. Very nice.
Love,
Terry.
x
Thanks Terry needed a reminder of summer. Plus I love 🌻 and bubbles! Px
Beautiful poem. You did wonders with this one! An uplifting poem. Well done!
Sarfraz x
Thanks for the pic sarf. It was perfect since I love 🌻 and bubbles! A little reminder of summer. Px
wonderful poem
i love sunflowers
i tell this story
one day i was
sitting watching tv
when girl
walked by
holding 2
sunflowers
i counnt beleave it
so i write poem
about it its some where
a year ago i think
Thank you Greg. Glad you enjoyed a piece of summer 🌻 You should find that poem and post it on here!! Px
You DEFINITELY brought the picture to life here with some sizzling phrasing and truly memorable poetic imagery PRATIBHA!!.......ALL STARS!!......well penned dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thank you Tony for the lovely comments. We all need a little summer even in the winter months :). Px
Energetic and electric. Just a refreshing poem from reading heaps of deep stuff at the moment hope you had as much fun writing as I did reading. Peace and smiles to you my friend.
Hi Max. I was thinking it should be posted in summer but then I thought no....we need a bit of refreshing summer now!! It was a fun write. I'm all prose. Thanks for the comments and reading it. Px💜
Just the tonic to warm up any lucky reader in these cold, colourless winter months.
A most welcome and well written write Pratibha and I've pinned it for a reread and in the hope of getting a tan!
Take care, many thanks and wish you well.
Thank you Shaun and for the pin! Just wanted to describe summer feelings in this one and looks like u and others want them too!! Appreciate all the ones you have read. Px
This describes the prompt picture very, very well. Nice go be reminded of bright, breezy days of colour and warmth when winter has its grip on us x
Thank you very much Tina. That was exactly my intention and so pleased you felt the same. Thanks for going back to read my other posts 💕💕💕 Px