Bury The Hatchet
I am suppose to believe that you are sorry
Although you scar me
There are so many knives in my back, you can bet
I could box them up and sell a set
I am no longer surprised
When I receive the lies
Or when the knife is twist while being looked in my eyesΒ
ItΒ leaves in my mouth a sour taste
When deceit becomes a common place Β Β
I am told it can't rain infinitelyΒ
But it seems a storm cloud follows me
And I get used and discarded like a toilet paper roll
expected to pretend like I don't even know
I am wide awake and will allow it no more
I am too hurt and want to even the score
So if you really want me to bury the hatchet
The base of your skull is where I choose to stash it
By LukeCoomer (c)
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Whoa!!Β LUKE!!..... this is a fine display of word choices leading to a VERY blunt and sharply delivered point!! (lol)........ you are getting better every time I read you....... at conveying, with poetic precision, your intent!!...... the opening two lines & the final two lines are powerful as hell....... and between, there is an array of uniquely "Luke Coomer" phrases that make you such a pleasure to read.......I Love ~ " Or when the knife is twist (not twisted, not twisting, just "twist") while being looked in my eyes" ~ I friggin' LOVE that!!.....I never would have thought of that in a million years..... anyway, I guess my point is...... I'm just enjoying watching you grow each day as you write more and more ......ALL STARS..... made your point beautifully here (smiles)....... LOVE and ROCKETS !!.....T xoΒ Β ?
the last two paragraphs made me grin lol love this pen
Thank you , thank you I can't say it enough!!!!!!