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Wow!! ALEXANDRIA HILL!!....... intense, poignant, amazingly creative......... and the subject matter profoundly relevant...... especially for those who live in big cities .......it's a fact of of life and survival in those overpopulated concrete jungles ........but you've painted the guilt into this beautifully.......a VERY well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered piece.......ALL STARZ!!... and....... in case no one has said so.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀

   Hello Alexandria, very well done. The mechanics of it all, as well as the wording did kept this very right on to read through it did fer me it did for me..., as well as in a nice balance for story conception to grown in the readers head. In fact, I read this one whole from beginning to end, which has been rare for me, vane as it may sound hehehe; however, it was very soothing to read; Once again, very well done...

   This reminds me of a lesson once read in a critical thinking class that once took I did I did, valid point VS sound points. A valid point being that anything can be argued, regardless of origin of point, if the beginning of the point is true or false, as long as the end point is can be argued to a valid point; however,  if the Sound point being based on if the origin being true,  then logically the end point has to be well thought out from a true beginning to a logical end based on truth. Lawyers often litigate on these premises...  Here, we see the end point being written out to conclusion of the woman dying, and the curious onlooker not interacting, though they had the chance opportunity to intervene, yet they did not, from a valid argument. Twould seem evil, or the going rate once again held up and continued, though, we never know the premise of the woman and the killer, what started, whom would be at fault, whom was the instigator and what the beginning of the truth of this story started as, very good write, made me a fan this write, very well done again.