Poem -

Can I Get Some Love From You Guys? (Or Hate)

Can you comment on my poems and let me
know what you think?

I really want to know if you like them
or they stink.

Give me words of advise, tell me what
is wrong

even if your rude we can still get
along.

If you read them once, tell me how they
are.

if you tell me they suck it wont leave
a scar.

Forget my punctuation, its the words
that I care

look at them all, but only if you dare.

I also like new ideas, give them to me
now

I will never quit, never throw in the
towel

love them or hate them I really want to
know

do you like or dislike the way they
flow

dont take me serious, im not that kind
of guy

I like to know what people think, I
really dont know why

dont have to get into detail just a
word or two

anything you say, will make dew.

I write them pretty quick, just what
comes to mind

I write about what I hear smell and
find

if I look and see 10 views on each

I expect at least 5 to leave a speech

you can even click those stars, they go
one to five

I will check on them later, to see if
any arrive.

I can return the favor I like to read a
lot

so read them all, and tell me what you
thought.

If you want my opinion all you do is
ask

ill be completely honest, and take off
my mask.

I want to say thank you for taking the
time

to read my silly goofy stupid little
rhyme.

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