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Can I keep you?

I loved you from the moment I knew you existed, your presence made my life uplifted. A little life to give us joy, a little soul, a baby boy.

I wish I could have kept you, could have touched your little hand, I wish you were here with me, more than I can stand.

It's been 3 years since I lost you. I couldn't keep you any longer. My body wasn't able, I wish that I was stronger.

I'll always wonder who you would have been, what you would sound like when you became a teen. I'll always dream of you, playing with your sister, maybe just a game of Twister?!

I love you more than words can say and I promise I will think of you everyday. Sleep tight my baby, in that beautiful place, just above in the open space ❤

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Most touching write! Taken home to that Father that gave them life! " little children" "such is the Kingdom of Heaven" Love to ponder the Celestial realms! thank you so much for sharing!............Jim

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Alice McGowan

Thank you, Jim. As painful as it is, it's nice to know that he's somewhere out there looking over us. 

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The fish of the sea

Agree with Jim! As soon as I saw the title I knew it was worth a look, paid out all the way. An adorable and personally special write, filled with excitement and passion. Enjoyed. TFOTS

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Alice McGowan

Thank you so much, I don't write very often so I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

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Marion

Lovely write Alice😊

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Being Me

I am so very sorry for your loss. You have written this perfectly x

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Nine Eleven

Hi hunny, always remember, your loss is our loss, although I could never comprehend the physical pain you feel, emotionally, I'm here, together, forever.

I love you xxx. 

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