Poem -
Cataclysma
She is as all portray her
Be her sanctum not the sun
She lives amongst the monsters
Where the many missing run
And thousands more
Will take her place
But not a soul
Will feel her numb
And thousands more
Will give her chase
But not a soul
Will see her come
She is...as all portray her
An angel known to none
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Very cool write Curious. Your mysterious woman sounds like a badass. Great flow and rhyme to this, nicely done. Peace.
Thanks Devon!! Always appreciate the compliments and feedback. She is a badass!!
CO
HI curious Great write about your mystery woman/dark angel?
it may be short but it packs a punch enjoyed
Cheers Debs
Thanks Debs! :) I'm glad you liked it!
CO
Hi Curious I don`t think it needs to be added to its powerful
as it is ..Debs
Another awesome compliment thanks for the feedback :)
I am SO glad I didn't miss this!!......... Powerfully enigmatic is she!!..........a phantom that stirs up chaos in her wake............ an angel cleansing through the guise of disaster........... the bringer of new beginnings with her cataclysmic presence!!...........a natural part of the fabric of times inevitability.........a welcome upheaval is she!!.........a warrior in the shadows is ~ "CATACLYSMA!!".........a little over the top?.......... what the hell!!.........I LOVED it!!...........thanx for this Curious Onlooker!!......... got my juices flowin' my friend......... gorgeous phrasing & rhyme scheme!!......... Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
Hey Curious!!....I hope you knew that I was worried I was being a little too "over the top" with my comment!?.............I hope you didn't think it meant anything other than that!!.......I just re-read it and realized that it could be interpreted otherwise........I was just excited when I read it........Loved it bro!!........T xo
No! Not at all I love your comments! I totally agree you knew exactly what I was going for! I'm going to comment further on yours in a sec but I love your comments, not over the top at all.
CO