Catching Butterflies of Hope
A bewitching creature
beautiful in its nature,
flying up above.
Your heart lights up.
Could there be hope?
So you run.
You want it yours
and give it all youâve got,
but you never quite seem to catch it.
So near yet miles away.
Finally you give up
and give inÂ
to its beauty.
You just stare,
knowing you couldnât catch it
though it was right before your eyes,
waiting for you to try.
Comments
Hi TUGBA!!...I really like the hopefulness that this VERY well crafted piece of poetic prose is conveying!!.... It's VERY creatively delivered my friend!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo. : )
Brilliant poetry xxx
Nicely written I wrote 2 poems 1 called a butterfly with one wing
and a butterfly with one wing part 2 you might like to readÂ
a couple years back the ladies group at our church had aÂ
butterflies are free party I adore the creaturesÂ
they have butterfly gardens you can watch themÂ
coming out of there cocoon'sÂ
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Beautiful as the butterfly.. lovely write TUGBA.
All the best.
This is the first poem I read today. Beautifully written!! One of my best friends was shot and killed by the police 2 years ago and I've been told that whenever I see Monarch butterflies that it's him. Thank u for writing this. I needed it today.
I couldn't help but absorb this into a metaphor about life ,and the beauty that's seems to be unattainable at times yet we go on to pursue it with all our might ...
Fabulous ink ! đ