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Perfidious eyes in shadow forsake me,
I Shun celestial dawn,
Tainted by thine fatal kiss,
It persuades me, unhallowed,
undone.
Laid on a bed of stone in mire,
Impurity enthralling the beast within,
Thirst takes on new desire,
Crescent moon heightens new sin.
Arisen from ash and roses in wilt,
Breath takes its leave, one last exhale.
Not a single drop of pure blood is spilt,
New ravenous urge as my old self fails.
I lay dead yet awake,
My eyes open for the first time,
A feeling like no other enslaves me.
No creature can evade me,
The world in wait is mine.

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this is friggin' brilliant SIMON!!......Beautiful usage of formatting and rhyme scheme!!......and fantastically original phrasing just sent this write 'way into' the heights of my favorite reads from Cosmo!!......ALL STARS & PINNED for perfection!!......bravo!! ???✴....well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo ?✴?
Thank you millions. I am so pleased that you like it. I wasn't sure at first if it was going to work but then I just went with it. Thank you again, you have given me a nice confidence boost. Take care.