Chemical Soup
On repeat
Questions and curiosity,
Blanks,
A gun.
Seems like nowadays,
I`m searching,
Everyone.
Where jealous and mentions,
Screaming for attention,
Empty,
In a dried-up daydream…
Well… screw your thoughtless theme!
My nightmares are bursting at the seams!
What`s my policy?
What`s the mystery?
If I`m so hard to please.
Infinite, finite loop,
A chemical soup,
Moral compass in Bermuda,
Silence stick? Just mute her.
And to you.
I sense your hesitation, through.
Gears behind those eyes, it's true,
Because I`m dangerous prey for my size,
And you know I`m smarter than most of the flies.
Are you Venus?
Because your act is seamless,
A planner, trickster, a thinker?
I have seen it a thousand times,
And your just another hook,
For me to leave it be,
I`m not falling again.
I`ll keep swimming.
Through the Sea.
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Sorry, the stars don't seem to work... Love this for its hope for better days...
That's all we can hope for isn't it John! Glad you liked it my friend! Keep swimming.
I will for another forty years and then into a different life for I am not done with the world, don't worry - but still the stars don't work, was trying to get 5 of them over this...
Yes, restarting my comp helped getting the stars right...
Thanks so much John!
Max a great write that simply flows, delivering its poignant and human characteristics message in spades and it so surely delivers.
A poem to reread so I have pinned it.
Thanks Max and enjoy life.
Awww thanks so much Shaun, I always struggle with the balance but I'm really glad you liked this one! I try to create with a foundation of feelings! At least most of the time ;) Peace and smiles to you my friend. Max
Well this is intriguing, Max. Such depth! 👏👏👏 x
XD, thanks Tina! I'm really glad you liked this one my friend! Smiles to you.
Deep. Great write.
Incredibly cleaver as always.
Wonderful write max.
Awww thanks so much Liliana! I'm really sorry for the late reply. Will be checking out your poem shortly. Thanks again my friend. Max
Thanks again!
Great Poem! even Fish nest XD! go to schools and hang out with ones their own size,some have to continuously swim and have a hard time building anything without a solid foundation.Hard to swim when you get old like me! XD! Really nice write my friend! someday I wish we could have a conversation without all the bubbles, XD!
Thanks Jim! So very true, so much swimming, in search of.... something. Really I feel like we are most at peace when we settle down and relax! I think I'd suffocate without my bubbles though! XD thanks so much again. Peace and smiles, your friend Max
Such a powerful read, you are an excellent writer and you see further than most
LOVE it 😘😘😘
Wow. Thanks so much! Really it means a lot for you to say that ;). I'm really glad you liked it. Hardest part is finding inspiration. Second hardest is finding a song to go with it XD. Thanks again. The Fish of the Sea
Always a pleasure 😍 happy writing xxx
XD! Same to you Dominique!
Very nice Fish! 👌🏻
I`m really sorry I missed your comment! But thanks so much JP, your words always mean so much my friend. Peace to you. Fish