Poem -
CLOULDS IN MY TEA
Their was clouds in my teaย
As i sit by the sea watching
the birds fly free,
Their was clouds in my teaย
As i sit by the sea and birds
Crowd by the sea they were
So loud and then the waiter
Bowed when he served my
Tea and the bird had his the
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Nerve to take my cakeย
For heavn sake i think
I see clouds in my tea,ย
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Greg I had so much fun reading this fab write. Because your rhyming in this is sublime my friend. Really made this extra special. This is a poem to read out loud. It skips along trippingly well. I was sat at the seaside with those gulls that hang around trying to pinch your food. So much fun thank you Greg ๐x
thank you Gwendoline
it took me for everย
to write this it was so hardย
today it all came in placeย
thank you for readingย
You are so welcome, you did a fab job x
I like these words of yours Greg and I am not ashamed to let you and anyone else who visits them after me that I like them a lot .. I am also impressed with the way you seem to find such amazing photographic images to head your pages .. this one of the clouds in the tea cup is particularly captivating ... Neville :)
Thank you Nevilleย
this was a very hard write
I donโt know why it took me so long to writeย
It seems lately all the things that Iโve been writing have been very hard donโt know why you have a wonderful day
I understand that completely Greg .. we all have days, weeks and months like that .. Have a swell day your good self my friend .. N:)
Lazy lovely write Greg...I.imagined sipping tea on a beach and the clouds reflecting in the cup as those cheeky seagulls swoop...beautiful x
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Thank you Marionย
Your welcome friend x
awesome job Greg only see one small typo. "heaven" at the very end of your awesome pen
Thank you Lisa
Enjoyed reading this Greg and so deftly written and filled with superb imagery toย compliment your poem as well.
An enjoyable read with a gentle breeze of fun woven in as well.
And good to see.
Thanks for sharing and back tomorrow to read more and catch up.
In the meantime keep writing and I wish you well.
And put that kettle I'm dry as bone and could murder a cuppa!!
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