COLD CASE #2

"BOBBY HAS A GUN"
In this box is all you will see of me and
all that is left of my remains,
A life not chosen, to be not, so free
and one that can’t i even explain.
A young kid at heart Why did I depart,
My life it was like Living an enchantful dream.
But when you came around,
This new life I had found.
Together we would have,
Boast a true team.
One late early May, On an eerie
cold day.
All changed to what now
come to have followed
Your presence of mind
You had now left behind
And me, have you left,
Feeling hollowed.
You turned and walked away
No reason did you stay
Abandoned you did with all haste.
Though that look in your eye
No, norI, too, shall cry,
And no tears for you, shall I waste.
Though you returned that night
In a raged filled fight
With eyes as burnt as coal
In you no one was home
Your mind had it gone
And your soul to the devil
Had you truly sold
As I turned to plead my case
In your minds eye,
had i now been erased.
But not left was,
I to be out done
So you turned to me,
the second time no need,
are reason to read, between the lines,
as you load and at me, point your gun.
As i struggle to get away,
I could clearly hear you say
Your hour at hand has arrived
As the gun had discharged off,
And I heard myself blood cough,
Just knowing I would not survive.
I took my last breath
Soon to subcomb,
to my finale death
I turned and ask him why,
No reason were there,
No more, did he care,
As he gestured to me,
Please, Just die.
So I lay In my own blood
My heart beats, its last thud
The mind, now races with fear.
Even though I am alone
And all hope, has now gone
This little voice inside,
do I still hear.
His soul burns in hell,
And in due time, all will tell
My death, would not be, that in vain.
with mind, lost in thought
finished fight, have I fought,
thank god, I feel no more pain.
So as I looked down on me,
Not realizing what l would see,
Innocence lost, never to be returned
But one thing I know,
The place, where he’ll go,
Will be eternal and
There, he’ll watch his life, be burned.
So whenever you are faced
With a broken heart, out of place
Never with it, stand alone
There breeds no kind of magic,
To save a life, lost to tragic
But if can, Please make use of a phone.
JIM
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Thanks a bunch Chris and you like William, is one of a kind...
Stay Cool as always,You're like family,
Jim
hi jimmy this is an amazing poem every word i got drawn in to the situation like i was the one shot and heartbeat fading. your getting good at the coldcase writes hope to see more its like poetry equal to true crime or master detective magazines love that stuff !
congrats
tina x
As always thank you Tina,out and about and can't find enough time in the day lately to set and respond to you all that much, but constantly got you all in mind.
Forever,
Jim
very interesting poem!
Appreciate that a lot Elaine, you take care and keep your wonderful poems rolling in.
Sincerely,
Jim
Hey Rachel,
Coming from you that was an honorable compliment,as great as your writings are and i felt there should have been a little twist in the mix, allowing the victim to retaliate in the end and getting her just do's.Sometimes we have to administer our own form of justice, to ensure the ending, be a happy one and for the right people....Thanks again
Jimmy
Love the cold case series- keep it going...
Hi Sandra and thank you, i am working on one as i speak...
Sincerely,
Jim