come inside !

true treasure i have found

nice write

Dear Tina,

     I'm in love with your mind, body and soul. This poem (and so many of your others!) are filled with so much womanpower- how can I resist? I do want to come inside and learn all that you have to teach. This is a siren song to any man who dares to be seduced by a Mistress of Light (I'm paying attention!). After my flesh is drained- I still have to gather enough strength to earn your respect. What must I sacrifice inside your temple? I want to know all your secrets!

                                                                                                               James Whaley

It's gonna hard to sleep tonight wondering about those deep secrets (!). You're well-rounded - talking about family and love (lost and found!), dreams and memories and the hope for a better world. You seem to be an inspiration for so many other poets on this site- and an object of desire as well. I am paying close attention- but remember you must be respected.

                                                                                                           James Whaley

Hey (Lil) Sis,

Absolutely tantalizing and a mystery of treasures to unfold, once the passage way of your characters, ever so elusive, chest  of treasures, has been secured and nurtured, with the embellishment, of gentle strokes of caress. A reward fit, only for that of her enchanted prince charming to be behold and then only, shall your character in this poem, succumb to the many pleasures, that she has awaiting her.You have cleverly implanted in this character and in this sultry poem of temptation, by its temptress and with no lack of poignancy intertwined, in search of her soul mate.....Great  Poem (Lil) Sister.....

Your (Brother),

Jim 

You are welcome Miss Tina.And your poems, has reached a height beyond belief, i remember when you placed your first and gave yourself not enough credit, for the power in that one, what do you have to say about yourself now Lady??? I said it then and went beyond, very well written and great piece, at that time but now, you lady, have mastered each and every touch, you have,(with your fingers), placed on your key board and have set your own limits, for your perfection in your poems, which are non limits at all.Each poem you present, is a masterful work in progress, from beginning to its ending.You snatched the pebble, from the palm of the hands, of some of the serious poets on this site, a long time ago,now you have reached the status for others, to attempt to reach for that pebble, which you have mastered and placed so securely in the palm of your hands-- but-- in reach, for all those, that seeks the perfection you maintain.....Again Great Poem... And well deserving of a nomination, if not a win.....

Take Care,

Jim 

Dam girl that was a turn on, thanks needed a jump start, lol.. great rhythm and rhyme and fellow poets are right you have a great mind, thank u for inspiring me love your poetry always look forward to your work very stimulating never dull.. thank u xoxo

A powerful write. Erotic, with poetic muscle as well! The mind is every bit as important as the body, where attraction is concerned, especially long-lasting attraction. A well-stated poetic piece! ~ Robert.