Come With Moon
Come with moon
Come with stars
Come with eyes like open jars
Sink into the forest deep
Be mindful where you place your feet
Be still
Be calm
Behold its charm
Be ready with an open palm
For little eyes do softly peep
From little minds
with little feet
Betwixt the trees
Betwixt the grass
Betwixt the moonlight beams that pass
Beyond the veil which taints the eye
Betwixt the land and ornate sky
Through feral woods
Through hallow grounds
Through whispers found in nature’s sounds
Beyond the scope of manmade dreams
Within the corners of life’s seams
They sit
They hide
They softly call
To those who wish to hear at all
And gently place a loving hand
To help the mindful understand
So come with pen
Come with book
Come be one within the wood
Come see their little world so bright
Come hear their song
Come dance
Come write
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Comments
absolutely stunning refrain
Wow thanks so much for your kind words and pin. So very happy you enjoyed this one x
So hopeful and an utterly beautiful write Gwen...when you do it It do it so well xxx
Thanks so much my friend. So pleased you enjoyed. We always doubt ourselves don’t we. Thanks for the encouraging words xxx
ASTONISHING!!........an open invitation to those "In the know"!!......VERY well conceived and absolutely BEAUTIFULLY delivered dear poet sister!!......PINNED!!....it truly sings inside the head well after you've turned the page!!......truly magical GWEN!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wow thanks Tony for these wonderful words that are so encouraging. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. You are always so generous and kind. Thanks if being you :) x
Hi Gwendoline,
You have great vision
which few of us can match.
Love,
Terry & Anne.
xoxo :)
Gosh Terry & Anne thank you for your kind comment. So pleased you enjoyed. I swear I just stumble about like everyone else :) All the very best to you both xx
Such a talented writer.
Wow JP many thanks for such a kind comment. You are the talent my friend. You have a wonderful wise mind x
most lovely!....................................................................................Jim
Awe Jim many many thanks for these kind words :) so very pleased you enjoyed. All the best to you my friend x
The awards assigned by me above
were no mere reflex
but assigned with much thought
and more than just a dash of luv ..
well maybe respect & admiration
would be more fitting
But luv I did & do
of that pic of the impish fairy sitting ..
Yep, no kidding,
seriously enjoyed
from one magical end
to the concluding other .. x
Awe Neville you are a wonderful poet my friend. With a heart so big, it radiates in all your comments you leave here on Cosmo. It is such a delight to have you read and leave such words here on this little poem of mine.
I will savour your kindness and thank the cosmos that you found this site and share your poetic charm and wonderful human nature with all of us here
you ever grateful friend
Gwen :) x
Well I for one am chuffed to bits that you should even consider such a thing ..
Your equally grateful friend
Neville :) x
Found it! This is the one of yours I wanted to find, read a while back and was bowled over Gwen!
Forgot to do the honours part, but will make amends now.
Your poem, this poem is just bloody fantastic writing throughout.
Excellent, captivating, beguiling, yes I could gush more words.
But this is the kind of poem and its indelible inked theme, is one I believe, poets dream of writing, myself included.
I may as well pack my poetry bags now and abdicate, for I could never dream up or attempt to dare write something this good.
Love it!
This is timeless poetry calling Gwen.
Shaun. x
Shaun I am so sorry to of missed this very thoughtful comment. I went away for months and didn’t know you left this. I stumbled onto it and felt awful for not replying sooner. But thank you for leaving not just a comment but such a compliment and words that are truly encouraging. Although I must disagree to parts, as I have read and envied many of your works my friend. I do hope life is treating you well. That you continue to write and touch the hearts of many
Gwen xx
Gwen just revisiting a timeless piece here and hopefully it will deservedly be published one day for a wider audience to read and enjoy.
I hope you are still writing.
I hope you return.
And I hope this message finds you and it finds you well my friend.
Shaun xx