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I put my words out there, for all the world to see,
i hope they like my work, and I hope they like me,
Its always gonna be hard, to have critics you don't know,
Especially when your thoughts, and your feelings are on show.

Some comments can be nasty, some people can be cruel, 
But here is my one thought, here is my one rule,
Constructive criticism is what's needed, for one to progress,
Even if there writings poor and even if a mess.

So here is my suggestion,
to think before you type,
​​​​​​because once the words are out there,
From one's mind you cannot wipe.
 

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