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commitment

commitment

To have to hold, a truly wanted soul

You know they are made of gold

The preciousness of this is sold

Only when your not told

IF this was important to you

You'd never let it go would you

This truly precious gem you hold

The metal around it made of gold

Your wear it on your hand to say

I will never forget what I promised that day

To have to hold, to love to till old

To care, not wear this lieing stare

To remember we are supposed to be a pair

To do the little things that would repair

The wrongs we do we can't just say

I'm sorry your not happy today

How many times does that word get used

Just so that we can abuse

The ones we love with lies untold

Cause we forgot we said I do

I do for what you do for me

I will not fail you in anything

I promise to be there for you in anything you ask me to

So I'm sorry just don't fit for a commitment

When that promise was made to keep you safe

We promised ourselves we'd be there for sure

We promised ourselves to commit this pure

Love was our only wish to commit for us in this crazy place....

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Ravindra Kumar

Well suggestive nature. Poem is enough to make a man practical. Best composition of sub-judice thoughts.

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Sayed Thangal

Dear  Alicia,

mutual understanding and respect are pointed out here, but unfortunately there is some thing wrong in our dealings. well done.

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