Poem -
Confession Time
Song inspiration (Bad in me)
I, I, I wanna stay
But I know it ain't right
Bring out the - bad in me
I, I, I Don`t wanna hate
But I`m feeling a wayย
That I can`t explain
You bring bring out the bad - in me
I`m losing the reigns rather set you free
I try, try everything
But I know it ain`t right
Bring out the bad in me
Body says yes
Heart says no
Mind conflictedย
No, where to go
When a crime is committedย
It's only a matter of time
I have dug my grave
and there's no getting out
No.
Not this time.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
Sounds like a hit! Jim
Thanks Jim... Kind regards. TFOTS
Oh...mysterious write but fast paced...enjoyed the read Mr Fish ...๐ค๐ค
Thanks, Marion! I`m glad you liked it. Good to get things off my chest, even if they aren't as clear as would like sometimes ;). Kind regards. TFOTS
For me ...it is the emotions conveyed in a work that makes it powerful...it's not always necessary to know the details...๐ค
Awww thanks Marion, similar for me and music I think... something songs can really connect with me without a single word being said, love that. Kind regards, your friend. Max
Yes...I get that completely...love music...and on that note ๐คฉ I'm off to bed...night Max ๐
Night Marion!
Loved it๐๐๐๐
Thanks so much, Susan, Glad you enjoyed the read ;) FOTS
โCa alorโ...great job Fish. The rhythm was a fresh running stream,enjoyed the flow.
Thanks so much Cleo! I`m glad you liked it ;). Best wishes to you. TFOTS
You are such a talented poet. I liked the read very muchย
Awww thanks so much Lisa, that's really awe inspiring coming from someone like you~ you have no clue how much that means to me XD. I'm glad you liked the poem. The FOTSย
Very cool.ย
Thanks, Liliana! your comments always mean so much. Kind regards. TFOTS