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Cosmofunnel

Cosmofunnel literally it's just that , as I pour my heart's cosmic emotions through its big opening and out comes a longed for conclusion 
Cosmofunnel literally it's just that, as I pour my mind's cosmic thoughts through its big opening and out comes a hidden message 
Funnels start with a big opening and work towards narrowing down what's been started to what really matters in reality 
But without our fellow poets comments Cosmofunnel is just another means of travel, point a to point b, with no meaning or purpose 

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Tony Taylor

Amen to that brother ROB!!....the problem now is simple......allowing the sleeping giant to awaken and either rectify......or deny......that this site will ever return to the days when "So Many" newly created artistic offerings..... flowed.... through this most lovingly cyclonic distribution of beautifully iconic representations of poetically magical offerings....to 'become' or not to 'become' just another pile of bones in the graveyard of the internet's never-ending attempts at truly poetic offerings......or....just another good "Garage Band" in the grand scheme!!......I leave it to you kind sir!!......A fine piece of poetic prose my friend!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  :  )

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RG

Thanks Tony, you nailed it with the " garage band " comparison ....lol to funny.  So true ... 

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Gwendoline

I think Tony covered it in his comment. It would be nice if Cosmo returned to its once glorious state. I have yet to experience the grandeur of the once mighty cosmic stream of poets. But until then,I shall continue to enjoy the intimate poetic social connection found here. As we who remain continue to share that poetic flare and enjoy each other’s works :) 
 Great writing Rob x 

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RG

Gwen , no worries as long as I'm around we can keep the collabs going during the slow season 😉
i agree with every point Tony, yourself and Tina have mentioned here . I guess it's like anything else in life .....its what we make of it. I will voice a SPECIAL thank you to yourself, Tony, Tina, Marion, Barker, Jim, Neville and Greg as these are the most responsive and supportive people on here for myself personally. Poetry to me is fun from the various interpretations based on the readers points of view so a piece of work can transform through comments and I think that's the magical part. 

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Gwendoline

Exactly Rob, it is why I love reading poetry as much as writing it. Because poetry is subject to interpretation and that makes it even more powerful and exciting to discuss. The reader can take something from a poem, the writer didn’t realise was even there. It’s fabulous. I just wish more could see how reading and commenting can not only bring more out of a poem, but also it can help evolve the writer (even those who are poets reading others works) reading feeds our imagination and adds strings to that poetry bow we each have :) 

And you are too kind Rob, I am sure all those you mention shall truly be grateful to have a dedication from a poet such as yourself x 

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Being Me

Yep, I agree wholeheartedly with you Rob! Cosmofunnel is more, much more, than the sum of just the poems. What would it be like if everyone just posted and no one ever commented on anything?  Pretty yucky. It is good to be on Cosmo for the friends made x

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RG

It would be way less moving , like I explained above to Gwen, the different points of view or interpretations is what makes it exciting and fun..... There are few such as yourself Tina that actually understand poetry to the level you do so your feedback is always held to the highest standard . I greatly appreciate you and all of your efforts to continuously be  a positive promoter on here :) 

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