Crazy Crazy Love
Kinda lost it today, so the truth is now out
Totally love you, of that there's no doubt
Passion overtook me, my emotions broke free
Out came my craving my craving for thee
It tests my restrain for ultimate endurance
Was doing quite well till this recent occurrence
All hell broke loose, and I lost my composure
Feelings took over showing total exposure
Can't live without you, I'm yours heart and soul
I submit to your charms, I've lost all control
Until that moment my restraint must remain
Although I will suffer this unbearable pain
Well worth the wait, of that there's no doubt
Until it happens my poor heart will pout
Have always been able to show great restraint
But my craving belies this sweet picture I paint
So when somebody asks me if I'm feeling okay
I'll pretend things are normal but I long for that day
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Comments
Hey Santa Jack this is a well written piece, the flow and rhyme scheme are great and I will tell you crazy love is a passionate love its so overwhelming its uncontrollable but still beautiful. Enjoyed my love and respect.
Hey sweetie! You are too too kind!!! Between you and Cherie, you keep me afloat! I owe you!!!!! ((hugs)) and a bunch of love, Santa xoxox
You deserve all the support your a good man with a great sense of humor, I enjoy reading your writes. Do us all a favor Santa keep on hiving us the gifts of your poetry. Your friend D.
Gonna keep on writing as long as I'm physically able... so far so good! You are sweet, dear friend! Loads of love and happiness! Santa xoxox
Hi Santa jack. A great poem. The picture is how I see my sweet CHERIE all the time .a poem that reflects the crazy love I have for her . Great write Santa jack hugs to you
You are way too kind, Brandon my friend! Cherie is a lucky person to have your love! "The picture is how I see my sweet CHERIE" LOL ((hugs)) Santa Jack
Thanks jack my name is Bradford stay sweet
Sorry Bradford... silly me, I knew that! My apologies, my man!!!
Great write. Crazy Love.. sniff. sooooooo lovely.. could feel this poem. Well done.
Happy you could relate. my love!!! LOL Honoured that you liked it!!! Major ((hugs)) and much love... Santa!!! xoxox