Poem -
Creep
Please, please, you must let me go
Squeeze, squeeze, my lungs, soft and slow
Pleasโplease, youโre merely a ghost
Tease, tease, your touch, I loathe most
Grief, grievesโmy heartโs aching too
Please, ease, mired memโries of you
Freeze, freezeโyour touch, cold as ice
Thieves believe in lifeโs avarice
Wheeze, seizeโdarkness creeps, not a sound
See leaves fall from trees to the ground?
Breathe, breathe, I cannot catch my breath
Knees bleed, โtil Iโm greeted by death
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Well written sir well done. Enjoyed.
Thank you for checking it out, Simon. I sincerely appreciate your comments.
All my best,
~Dean?
tension builds...emotions run high in this piece (thumbs up)ย
Thank you for reading, Sarah. I really appreciate it!
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awesome job, love how simple, but strong it is!!
Thank you very much for reading, Ella.
I appreciate it!
โฅโค๏ธ~Dean~โค๏ธโฅ
Really liked this one Dean ,powerful words x
Hi, Audrey.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on this one.
I am very grateful for your feedback.
Hugs!
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