Poem -

Cruise Snobs

                                                                         Here on the uppermost deck
                                                                                       where there
                                                                           is not one single Adonis
                                                                                    or Aphrodite ..
                                                                         A whole shit load of posers
                                                                                     and masses
                                                                           of cellulite, bad manners
                                                                                  and cheap bling
                                                                         appear to have been thrown
                                                                                 together and then
                                                                         tossed like some grandiose
                                                                                       ego salad
                                                                         around the hot tub and bar ..
                                                                                  Which is maybe
                                                                        why I feel most comfortable
                                                                                    down below ..

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Nev...

I have been invited on a Cruise a few times and that was always a vision that popped into my had and I said No thank you...

Someone would be overboard...

It's probably for the best I don't go...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

​​​​​​There's 2 types of wealthy...

The other types are rich and talk poor...

People have a hard time remaining down to Earth...

I have a question have all the Meteorologists retired?

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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author
Neville

Can't argue with that, thanks for swinging by and mooring up a while ..

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author
sparrowsong

Head not had...

It's trying to make me look like I can't spell at all...

Leave that for those who really can't...

Duh!

Nice try smart device...

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author
Neville

such is artificial intelligence .. just another reason why we need to evolve ..

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