Poem -
Curtains Calling
if you don't get it immediately, or after a while of thinking about it .. then feel free to ask :) I shall be away for a...
I can almost see the ocean
from her bedroom window
the wind is blowing a gale
and the curtains are dancing ..
I am here only because
of my love for beauty
and my eyes are drawn again
to those dancing curtains ..
This morning, they appear
even more beautiful
than the lady busy showering
after last night’s exertions ..
I have another ladies number
I keep for emergencies
she is more a friend these days
and does not believe in curtains ..
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Hello Neville, thought I'd check in see if you're still alive. I hope so anyway. I like this one ...the last line alludes to a special someone( or maybe not special) who is always there. Read another way it might also describe the perceived difference between a lady and a whore. It's that last line...always that last line. Hugs x
Good morning my very dearest of M's and thank you so much for the above premature pseudo condolences .. they are very much appreciated ..
I am delighted you found my scribble 'Curtains Calling' and even more so that you looked upon it so favourably ..
Oh' and even more, than more so even that you noticed and seem to approve of the deliberate uncertainty I left behind which I suppose is something of a personal trademark or signature that is not always present and sometimes does not always work .. The hug you left is however always appreciated and likewise reciprocated ..
I have not long returned from my latest Caribbean adventure that was my first non work related break for quite a while and which I felt I owed myself and was much needed .. It also served to inspire a few additional scribbles as did the beast named 'Beryl' that followed me across the ocean and only left when it decided to hit the Dominican Republic & Jamaica a few days later .. Quite the lucky escape ..
Here's hoping you are good and behaving yourself my friend .. All Goodest of Things,
Your Pall,
Neville x
Hugs x
I am impressed, no shit 🤩😆😆 X