dark knight
dark horse he had,dark knight he was
fighting with all his might
for everything in his deep lonely heart
was love that was so light
the power of the black clad knight
a passion in his soul
he rode through murky waters
eerie swamp's and putrid hole's
the mystery surround's him
who or what he is
the dark knight sword in hand
comes tearing through the mist
a vengeance sworn within his armour
to save his love from death
he battles soldier's one by one
and slain's them all instead
his eye's so deep and entrancing
a spark of something wild
but love did capture all of him
fast and furious he did ride
he rode around the castle walls
his life in danger too
instead of riding far away
he came to save just you
up in his arm's he grabbed you
with a force your heart did melt
an arrow of love just pierced
dark knight the one you felt
he rode so fast dark horse with steam
from nostrils flaring wide
dark knight has got you now
safe where you can hide
into the mist dark knight and you
faster than a spell
no sight,no sound,no word's
a story you can't tell
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lovely poem lovely story great x
thanx susan love all that ancient stuff tina x
Dear Tina,
Your power as a poet is growing- combining love with an understanding of your knight's quest. It's been said before how part of your art is the ability to help the reader visualize what your mind is able is to see so clearly- and what your feels so strongly. And like every great love story- the part that words can't express. Sooner or later, one of your love poems or war poems will win. Nevertheless, prize or not- you have to be counted among this forum's most talented- if not the most prolific.
James Whaley
wow thanx for the compliment james its easy when loves concerned to put yourself in any situation and visualize what you want to happen or is happening and turn it into a love poem-story for a man you see pretty well into that tina x
Hey Tina,
A quest you only could have sought out and delivered. A mans last stand for his lady of first and beyond all measures will he stand for and against in lieu of his mission to save, what belonged to him only and for that, which he would pit his life up against, any and all and for, to ensure her return, safely back into the arms of, the one whom has always vowed, to to take her hand and heart, as his own.A fight that has no finish, until she was safely within the confines of his vengeful and forever longing embrace.A dark knight known to all indeed but to her, he was her hero, love of her life and her only hearts desire.......Tina You are a great story teller as well as a wonderful poet, keep pushing your pen and pencil, to heights that supersede perfection, for you have and know no boundaries....Mystically Magically delicious....
Forever,
Jim
jim i always love getting your comments as they read really well into what ever i write there is a dark knight out there for every woman and a lady who needs to be saved i love all the ancient feel about things and would loved to have been that lady in distress lol thank you for reading jim
hope things at home are good
all the best
tina x