Poem -
Dark Matter
*Simon's Alien Challenge*
Stars above burst and scatter
Dusky skies emit dark matter
Shrouded foreboding shade
Spectral align heaven-made
Gild twinkle kindle-form
Teeters in cosmic storm
Fragmented celestial star
Shards of imploded char
Vortex to furthest plane
Silence in endless reign
Murky ebon infinite pitch
Creations ultimate glitch
Divine Illuminati alight
Designs vastness bright
Brail upon canvas stark
Civilizations probe the dark
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Comments
Fantastic...really powerful Lisa. I'm using the one I wrote last night before I knew of his challenge ok...and it's about similar so...sorted ?
Thank you Marion. I adored your challenge post
Brilliant Lisa you answered the challenge masterfully! Pinned
Thank you kindly Simon ooooo next challenge βlostβ have fun
Ok may take a while I have appeared to have hit a wall and feel a tad deflatedΒ
Nothing says it has to be done right awayΒ
The language is awesome, as well as the rhyme scheme. You sure know how to master a writing challenge.Β
I'm so glad I found your poem.Β
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Thank you kindly if youβd like in for the next challenge it is βLostβ The whole just of the challenge is to have fun!
OMG I canβt follow thisun β Brilliance & pinned β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Lol was going way outside the box ? thanks for stopping by to leave oβ bit of love
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My Dear Lisa,
Your powerful words take their readers to the endless boundaries of the Universe, into Galaxies unknown.Β Your poem is so easy to lose oneself in, and float to the distant stars.
All my love,
Larry xxx
thank you Larry