Hey Curious!!...........this reminds me of an old poem with one of my favorite lines.........." Grey days shine the brightest.."............this lovely dichotomy you've created resonates with the greatest lessons life has to offer............without light no dark..........no good without evil............no dreams without disappointments...........the yin and yang of the ever-evolving universe...........I've really been enjoying your stuff lately............you're blossoming............and it's a pleasure to behold..........well done my friend...........smiles...........T xo
I really can't thank you enough for such a comment as this, if..indeed I am blossoming it is thanks to poets of your caliber that make my progress smooth and unique and I aim to create poetry of such depth as I've seen from your writes, thank you
CO
Lots of beautiful truth in this poem, Curious....keen use of irony to paint a picture that tells a story; 'tears of a clown' scenario....you're a very bright and talented poet with good eyes....love this poem, it stays with you, sign of class....cheers...yeah the pull quote lines are terrific
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Hey Curious!!...........this reminds me of an old poem with one of my favorite lines.........." Grey days shine the brightest.."............this lovely dichotomy you've created resonates with the greatest lessons life has to offer............without light no dark..........no good without evil............no dreams without disappointments...........the yin and yang of the ever-evolving universe...........I've really been enjoying your stuff lately............you're blossoming............and it's a pleasure to behold..........well done my friend...........smiles...........T xo
I really can't thank you enough for such a comment as this, if..indeed I am blossoming it is thanks to poets of your caliber that make my progress smooth and unique and I aim to create poetry of such depth as I've seen from your writes, thank you
CO
Short, but cute and most lovely verse, my applause, my five stars
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Lots of beautiful truth in this poem, Curious....keen use of irony to paint a picture that tells a story; 'tears of a clown' scenario....you're a very bright and talented poet with good eyes....love this poem, it stays with you, sign of class....cheers...yeah the pull quote lines are terrific
'As it warms my skin
And freezes my heart'