Poem -
Darkness
Darkness is a scary place,
Where dreams are crushed
To small pieces
And nobody is there to save you.
There is a void of love,
A loss of care,
And no way to escape.
Voices are heard
But not comprehended.
The light is far
And unattainable
But briefly in view.
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Hey DAHLYA!!......this is an interesting piece to me.... because...... although the phrasing could be construed as purposely simplistic......... those final three lines...... blew me away......" The light is far, and unattainable, but briefly in view." ~ those are words SO profoundly true when it comes to the wisdom of the cosmos........ when the darkness surrounds you....... there is ALWAYS still a glimmer of hope........I LOVE IT!!........ALL STARS........ smiles & high fives sweet poetess!!....... well done......T xo
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