Poem - 26 April 2020, 03:25 Darkness and light Thais Ribeiro Ahlers Darkness and light, Together shine bright A force that unites Breaks through any plight DonĀ“t fear or take fright, Just let it be right See through, donĀ“t lose sight Remember your might. Like 6 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 644 Rating: Total votes: 5 Tags: Motivation Positive Strength Poetry Genre: Lyric Topic: Positivity Listed in: Contest Entries 8 comments
Larry Ran26 April 2020, 05:39 Dear Thais, Your powerful words paint a lovely portrayal, using two opposites, and uniting them as one.Ā I generally comment poetically, so I give you a Haiku. Through darkness and light My fortitude will unite Defeat my fright Peace and love, Larry xxx Reply
Thais Ribeiro Ahlers26 April 2020, 06:13 thank you so much Larry, that means a lot to me! Also,Ā great job with the Haiku :) Reply
Larry Ran26 April 2020, 06:58 Dear Thais, Now that we have connected, let's stay in touch. I think Cosmo needs to see more of your poetry. Peace and Love, Larry xxx Reply
Being Me26 April 2020, 05:41 I love the strength in this. I like the simplicity of it. Well crafted x Ā Reply
Thais Ribeiro Ahlers26 April 2020, 06:14 thanks so much, that means a lot coming from you ( I'm a fan of your poems) Ā Reply
Being Me26 April 2020, 09:43 You are very welcome...your poem is excellent!Ā Ā And thank you for your kind words āx Reply
Simon Bromley26 April 2020, 08:25 Brilliant write my friend.Ā So simple and yet so powerful well done Reply
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Dear Thais,
Your powerful words paint a lovely portrayal, using two opposites, and uniting them as one.Ā I generally comment poetically, so I give you a Haiku.
Through darkness and light
My fortitude will unite
Defeat my fright
Peace and love,
Larry xxx
thank you so much Larry, that means a lot to me! Also,Ā great job with the Haiku :)
Dear Thais,
Now that we have connected, let's stay in touch.
I think Cosmo needs to see more of your poetry.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
thanks, same to you!
I love the strength in this. I like the simplicity of it. Well crafted x
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thanks so much, that means a lot coming from you ( I'm a fan of your poems)
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You are very welcome...your poem is excellent!Ā Ā
And thank you for your kind words āx
Brilliant write my friend.Ā So simple and yet so powerful well done