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Darkness Got Nothing on Me

Darkness Got Nothing on Me

The scent of blood,

causes movement in the waters

a cold windΒ stirs the restless waves

and the man feels like an outcast

walking along the coastline

of this sea of darkness

With a song in his heart

and a smile on his face

he hears, but ignores the whispers;

voices calling out his name

Yet knowing in his heart

that they got nothing on him Β Β 

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Curious Onlooker

This was just awesome, need I say more? 5 stars my vote brother
CO

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sparrowsong

Brother Christopher...

Between your mind and mine...

Together would be...

Umm...

CRAZY!

Great Write...

Hugs

sparrowsong

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Christopher Correia

Hey Curious, thanks for that interesting comment my friend, you're really good at commenting; I enjoy your comments a lot, and they are helpful as well....thanks for the vote and five stars, but it's way more important to me that you like it, Β I enjoy and respect your work greatly....thank you again

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Christopher Correia

Thanks for saying that, Sparrowsong....lol, I know my mind is a little screwed up, but your mind is quite fascinating to me; Β at least when it comes to poetry....I enjoy your work, you are very creative and you don't repeat yourself, I love reading you....cheers my sweet friend....have good day

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Christopher Correia

Thank you Flower, I had to go back and re-read this poem; I forgot what it was about to be honest....I think you nailed the interpretation though...I love the expression; Β art is not what you the writer sees, but it's what you make others see...I think once you post something the interpretation can no longer be solely yours as a writer, but that is also my opinion, lol....cheers my friend

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mark thomas

Dark and light-- love title.Β Excellent Β 5 stars

BY dark and light I mean below...

of this sea of darkness

With a song in his heart

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Christopher Correia

PoetessDarkly is awesome, thanks a million for saying that, I'm very appreciative, glad you liked

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Christopher Correia

amazing comment Liian, and I did look her up....horrifying story that I intend to read more of, honestly I've not heard that name before, but now I'm so fascinated, thanks for giving me the heads up on her, I'm a huge history buff....I`m in London England right now and hope to soak in a tour or two....thanks my friend her story in incredibly interesting...glad you enjoyed poem and more importantly thanks for sharing the info on Bathory; kept me up last night

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