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DEAR DAUGHTER

DEAR DAUGHTER

Dear daughter you have a smile
that lights up a room
Your loving kind, and as
beautiful as a rose in bloom
Your heart is soft and loving
with a truly giving soul 
I sing your praises daughter
yes you, i will always extol 
You fill my world with happiness
with your laughter and fun
From your birth you have always
been, my moon stars and sun
You have helped me cope
get through much hurt and pain
In times of despair 
Times we hopefully wont see again
Your a good girl with so much to give
in yourself you must believe
Dear daughter i love you so much
you are, the air i breathe

 
 

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Tony Taylor

Hey DEBS!!..... this is lovely simplicity manifested as poetry...... I am so happy to see this kind of Love in your life........ your words would make ANY daughter cry....... and of course brought sniffles here....... because I'm a tough guy and never cry (lol)..... but seriously......this is the kind of thing that bonds....... that makes us writers applaud..... because honesty ALWAYS works...... and this is spectacularly honest and poetically beautiful........a pleasure to read.......a FISTFUL of stars!!.....PINNED!!......thanx for sharing this sweet poetess!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo.  ?

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Deborah Evans

Hi Tony I wrote this for my girl as she has`nt been very 
well all this week, feeling sorry for her self and has been in
a low mood, so wrote to cheer her up. I havn`t shown her yet.
We have always been close but this last year we have got to be so much closer
 I cant show my son though because between him and my daughter they have this
little game they play who is the golden child lol its so funny when they play 
They are my world,
Thank you for reading and the lovely comments my friend 
so appreciated. Love n hugs Debs xo 

  

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lisa Poetess Aww children they are such a blessing 
to us.. Sorry to make you cry,Sometimes i like to write
to them to tell them just how much they are loved.
Thank you for your heartfelt words 
best wishes Debs 
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Debs...

This is very beautiful! 

I hope this gives her a happy feeling...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Sis Sparrowsong Yes i read it to her this Morning
She liked it i had a hug off her :-)
Thank you for reading 
Hugs Debs 

 

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Byd0nz

Good on you Debs, never doubt how privileged we are for our children.

nice tribute.

Bydonz

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Deborah Evans

Hi  BydOnz  Thank you for reading
Indeed i feel very privileged and proud of my children
Best wishes Debs 

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Rose Sho

I love this....would be over the moon if my mum writes this for me....I'm sure this would definately lighten her mood....Your daughter is very beautiful...you too look great together....really enjoyed this

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi Rose Beth my daughter loved it i had hugs :-)
I enjoy writing about my children and family 
they are everything to me
Glad you enjoyed and Thank you for your kind words
Lots of love Debs 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

Awww.  So beautiful.  Your Daughter is your core.  She tends to your heart and soul, cultivating them with her overflowing love.  You are truly blessed.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry She is as is her brother my heart just 
a little write to tell her how much she`s loved
Thank you my friend for your kind thoughts 
love n hugs Debs xox

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Deborah Evans

Hi Flower Girl Thank you for reading and your kind words 
Always a pleasure to read your comments 
Love n hugs Debs xo
 

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