“Death at my window”
“Death at my window”
These are the remains, of a tested immortal soul,
on a train that receives no fare.
With just a painted old picture, coffee table
and a un-recliner chair.
A broken old watch, refusing to keep the right time,
a stone-less and tarnished ring, lacking luster and shine.
These were the treasures and only belonging, of an old man
but to others trash discarded, out of sight out of mind.
Items I recently inherited but from whom,
not known and quite frankly why?
My door bell ring, “the strangest of thing,”
at a time when even the owls, feared to fly.
It's several minutes til three and it's (AM), is what gets me
and the doorbell, (just as before), once again chime.
So I gather all senses, eyes half closed, not fully assertive
and when frolicking in the dark, as equally blind.
As my heart skipped several beats, I struggled to my feet,
to re-affirm what the eyes had just seen.
A body with no head, an old acquaintance long dead, which ensued a foot race,
between the heart, mind and (he), the unclean.
Struggling to keep my balance, as I quickly shuffled across,
my bedroom floor.
You tried to leave but in my heart, you weaved a fear,
that soiled deep within my core.
You were found now, peaking through my window,
afraid to dawn my front door.
when the moon appeared bright and full,Last night,
I saw you lurking within the hour of four.
You take in the many sites, each day and night,
of the restless souls you have laundered.
Many left to die, throughout the night, they scream and cry
and on the beaten path, I now ponder.
You slowly tip toe, from door to door demanding,
who, when and (yes) where.
Your game, a shame, the many took, you falsely blamed,
so I return to lay, like I wasn't there.
His are the ruins of an after life, with just one birth,
a soul long, lost and gone.
No pearly white gates, are known to in-shrine this throne,
no brick made from gold but instead, brimstone.
leaving not one stone un-turned, in order to find me.
from the grave and through the woods,
It appears he came to claim back, his most cherished,
of all goods......His Treasure
Jim
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Hello Jim, Spooky chilly write. I loved this, totally enjoyed my read. Great job. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
Thank you Cleo you are an inspiring poetess and respected friend indeed...
Jim
Brilliant!
You're the man my friend and with the entire pie...I'm just here trying to get a slice or two from you....
Take Care Player,
Jim
Greetings Anne,
Thank you kindly dear lady and appreciations, are well in order for the outstanding comment rendered...Your works, are the ones that are amazing and i will do my part by giving them all the attention and recognition that they definately deserve, just as others before me have already been properly and for all the right reasons placing theirs, (Because they are perfect pieces of poetic art delivered on paper, rather than on canvas)..I have read many of your works and now i will, (with pleasure), place my comments.....
Thanks dear lady,
Jim
Hey Jim!!....... first, i'd change neighborhoods my friend!! (smiles)......... this has some VERY effectively spooky phrases and amazingly haunting word choices running throughout..........a powerful narrative brother.......... and I gotta say........ when I read "...on a train that had no fare..".......I KNEW I was in for one helluva ride........... and the imagery just kept on coming like the devil had inspired my friend Jimmy to lay it out "Like it was!!" (lol!)............ awesome read man!!......... loved it......... so happy when you're here !!...........your friend and admirer...........T xo
Tony my friend, what a gift of words and remarkable insight has God bestowed upon you my brother and when i read your comment, all i could do is laugh and my friend, it was the first true laugh i 've had all day...You have a uncanny way of pulling the funny string Tony and it started from line one of your comment to dern near the very last but i am sure you knew this already....To place it all into perspective, we all are like pieces of tape here on this site and this (site), a special present given to us all by Cosmo Funnel to tend to with care and you my friend, is a major piece of that tape, which keeps this carefully wrapped package in tact..Thank you a bunch my friend and i could be no more happier, than when i am here with the entire group of warm hearted people, here on this site. All of us more than seemly cast from the same unselfished and compassionate mold...Tony your first poem, (from first we met) told us (all), that we had a hit on our hands and with you, were there no limits placed on your talent when you stepped from the crowd and onto the stage and man did you take it over...I am proud of you, just as much now, (if not more), then i was back then....You are one of my favorite poets and when you write, i'll always pull up a chair, hoping to set at your table for a doozy of a poem to read...
Much love Tony T.,
Jim