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Deep emotion

Deep emotion

When the heart grows numb in an excruciating ache, overwhelmed by emotions you begin to break. 
Hard breaths fill a tightened chest with a deepened release, the mind going so completely bleak.
The first stab of pain that cuts like a knife, that drains you're inner soul entirely of life. 
Giving into the thunder that trembles inside, the tears that you can no longer subside, fall free so vulnerable you cannot hide. 
Raw saddened emotion.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ann-Marie  I thought this piece 
was an excellent description of  
heartbreak. Nobody i don`t think 
could write this if they havn`t felt 
these emotions
so well written great job
Best wishes Debs
 

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Ann-Marie Scott

Hi deborah, I just wanted to say thankyou for you're lovely comment. Was written to show people there not on there own in these dark time's. Take care marie.

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Kimmy Alan

Indeed, a broken heart 'really' does hurt.

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Ann-Marie Scott

The heart is a fragile but yet a strong organ which is put too a test.

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