Poem -
The Deeper Sea of Darker Deaths
I thought about those words you said
Sent them to the mourning dead
The morning past, the sun has set
And brought us now a lethal debt
Pay it up or give your hand
Bury you beneath the sand
Send the waves over your head
Put you with the mourning dead
The deeper sea of darker deaths
Of darker hate take deeper breaths
You’ll need them soon just wait and see
Die a death and be not free
Your heart will stop and set you free
Send you deep within the sea
The deeper sea of darker deaths
Of darker hate take deeper breaths
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I like this very much. There's just one thing that kinda confuses me, " die a death and be not free, your heart will stop and set you free" ? It kinda contradicts it's self. Was it intended to do so?Â
Yes. It is basically saying that, in essence, you die and you are released from "captivity", only to be sent somewhere worse.
I see what your saying and I can dig it! But what about heaven? Must be pretty bad there too, huh.
Death in this case doesn't necessarily have to be literal. Could be you want something, but the way you get it happens to destroy you. Does that make sense?
Completely, that's for replying to me.Â
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