Poem -
Defeat
Dont care,
Sleep,
Sleep,
Repeat.
Energy long gone,
Sad,
Sleep,
Repeat.
Feel worthless,
Don't care,
Sleep,
Repeat.
Feel as if your fighting,
A storm going on forever.
Lightning strikes you to sleep.
Thoughts of tomorrow get lost,
As Today washes away.
Feelings of getting up,
Fights sleep,
But sleep is too strong,
So you lay there hopeless,
Yet defeat.
Dont care,
Sleep,
Sleep,
Repeat.
Energy long gone,
Sad,
Sleep,
Repeat.
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Comments
Cool write ..
I bet you came up with this while trying to sleep lol?
I do that all the time I find I do my best writing whilst trying to get to sleep I wrote one about this exact feeling last month called “ scare crow” .Â
Really enjoy your style great job?
WOW!! thanks! how did you guess!!! that is totally what happened.
Lol ...“ the scare crow at night comes only in spite of ones own conscious insight”Â
check out mine I bet it will make sence ?it’s “ the scare crow” actually
OK! I will totally check this out!
I find when im in the trance of  almost asleep you can delve into your thoughts with great abstract .. you find that to ?
I guess lyrics come to me when im  about to fall asleep.Â
I love the ... sleep repeat .. sad.. sleep repeat .. it’s so catchyÂ
thanks so much!!!