Poem -
°•°Will you?°•°
Will you set my soul on fire?
Will you be my hearts desire?
Will you do what you must,
to gain my complete trust?
Will you be the one I love?
Will you love me above?
Will you show me your heart?
Will you rip me apart?
Will you be my man?
Will you do what you can?
Will you sing to me a sweet surrender?
Will you treat me tender?
Will you run away like a tide, when you see my dark side?
Will you give it a chance?
Will you survive this dance?
Will you take my hand?
Will you travel to the promise land?
Will you take it slow?
Will you let our love grow?
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Comments
I don't have anyone in particular that my poems are for. I just get a feel for them. I thought the questioning would be a unique format for a poem.
"Will you set my soul on fire?
Will you be my hearts desire?" Well, that remains to be seen as you have yet to read my poetry, Megan.
Possibly...
Good, solid aabb rhyme scheme in all four of your rhymed quatrains.
I enjoyed the slight switch up as you substituted a triolet for your fourth stanza.
Very nice...
~Dean Kuch