Poem -
Denial
Something I wrote a while ago
Translucent is your skin
I see through your walls so thinĀ
Grin your grimmest smile so vileĀ
Letās play pretend
Fake it a whileĀ
Minute by minuteĀ
Mile by mile
We stumble togetherĀ
Both in denialĀ
Trying to savour any hint of emotionĀ
So as to justify the need for devotionĀ
Cringing -
Hearts stingingĀ
This love isnāt lingeringĀ
Empty and hollowĀ
A bitter tomorrowĀ
Bruised skin
Hearts dim
A numbness kicks inĀ
Yet minute by minuteĀ
Mile by mileĀ
We stumble togetherĀ
Both in denialĀ
If only we could be cruel to be kindĀ
But for now itās likeĀ
the blind leading the blind
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Comments
Oh god...haven't we all been here Gwendoline. Knowing it's going to end, has already ended but terrified of the carnage. Gave me the shivers remembering. Great write, full.of emotion X
Oh Marion itās an awful place to be. So glad I got my wings and flew from this one. Wish I had plucked the courage sooner mindĀ
thanks for reading and for your empathy š
Blockbuster!! Sizzling!
ok... let me calm down. Beautiful piece Gwendoline. Pinned this one.
Wilford, what a truly lovely read. You flatter me. Thank you for the pin and for your kind words šš»
Beautiful Gwendoline,Ā
As Marion said...
Even when the writings on the wall, we add more chapters...
Loved this!
Hello Bill, we certainly do like to try and hold on. So glad you liked this piece. Thank you for reading and giving me feedback š»
Beautiful and tragic and what more do need in a poem.
Another superb and engaging write Gwendoline and your ending is to poetically die for.
A real tour de force gemstone of emotions offered and quickly pinned for another deserving reread.
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Gwen just visiting your poetry neighbourhood and back to view a touch of class.
Poetry class, that asks to be deservingly and respectfully read again and thanks again my friend. x.
Shaun, my most sincere apologies my friend, I had no idea you had left a comment on this here poem in March! So so sorry for not replying sooner. Had I seen it, I would most certainly of offered you my thanks and continued gratitude for you me relentless support and insightful feedback. Many thanks for coming back and having another read. Your passion and talent for poetry is endless in its facets. I am always learning from you my friendĀ
A thousand thanksĀ
your friendĀ
Gwen xxĀ