Poem -
Depths of Loneliness
Emptiness, completely engulfing A longing, yearning so deep, It scares her.
With sad eyes, teary, cloudy, foggy from weeping She searches....
For signs of light, Sound, another dimension of being .....
Feels like drowning, rapidly in the dark pit of great quietness
So overwhelming already It's loud enough Could there be layers and layers more.....?
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Hey MAUREEN!!...... this is VERY creative!!....... using poetry to go one step beyond!!........ hour formatting is amazingly original...... and as a whole...... the entire piece is truly well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered........ I've never read anything quite like this to express your feelings on loneliness......... I've read A LOT of writes concerning this subject matter ........This "Stands Out"....... as above and beyond.........ALL STARS!!.......PINNED!!.......well done....... and WELCOME to COSMO!!!....... You've got something VERY special.....,. looking forward to more!!....,,,,,,LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo n?✳✴☀♥
Oh wow!! Thanks Tony!! I am honored by your kind compliments and interesting point of views:-) Am surprised as I genuinely just wrote that one night, it was clearly a lonely night...and here I am trying to let people see..have never posted any of my journals/poems anywhere...but hey more to come!
I do value great insights, pointers even constructive criticism!
Thank you again for a warm welcome Tony!
More to come:) :)
My dear there are more layers than were allowed to know in life but your persona represents a better living gained by the "taboo" of peeling into those layers. Keep peeling for your own.
Indeed there are many more!...question is how far do we want to "peel" and or how safe or liberating or depressing can it be..hahaha...left to beholder's imagination:)
Thanks for your comments @Rager012!