Poem -
Reality
Still feels like a dream... An imagination......delusion. That you are gone......
Sometimes we fight it, deny it.....resent it... Anger consumes us.... Disbelief....that you are gone....
Sadness engulfs us, bitterness surrounds us. Emptiness...that you are gone ..
Pain pierces...deep & innermost. Indescribable loss....sense of helplessness, loss of control That you are gone.
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Wow!!..... MAUREEN !!.....this is a VERY powerful write....... the pain of loss is conveyed beautifully...... and as you already know .....I Love the way you use such creative formatting...... helps the flow of the whole!!.......ALL STARS!!...... well done my friend!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo. ?✳✴☀
Thank you Tony! Pain is a complicated, all-consuming emotion that none of us can escape! I believe there's sooo many words that can be used to describe/express pain.
Hi Maureen. Lovely how you describe the pain of loss, so poetical!! To describe pain is boundless!!
Hugs and kisses
Leah
Thank you Leah! and I fully agree with you!
Withdrawl is the worst.....when losing one we love. Nice poem. JCG