Poem -
Desire
Whisper to me your thoughts your desire
Give me the strength to endure your admire
Let me live for today, forget yesterday, I want you now
Give me, feel me, love me, touch me, see me today and tomorrow
Pink is my skin, dark is your skin, let it blend in the night and climb
Climb through the night with the beat of the drum let us kiss the night
Play my every move, let our lips meet and our ribs reap with joy
As we toss and turn in the bedroom of my mind, Â I am full of you
A deep dark desire
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Comments
wow
Hey Paul, so you liked it?
Nancy
Ye i liked it, its beautiful, i have tried try write beautiful poetry but it wont come out like the way your words do, ive just wrote a piece called exit through a keyhole, i think thats about as much beauty i can write in a poem, and its really not much, i really like the way you have used such lovely words, Play my every move, let our lips meet and our ribs reap with joy, this is a beautiful line, i really enjoyed this poem
Paul- I will read your poem, I'm sure it is good, thanks for your comments and encouragement, I appreciate it.
Nancy
Ironically my poem is about a heroin addicts love of heroin
I kinda thought so, Really!
You are great!
Nancy
Heart pounding piece loved it!
THANK YOU!!! I'm really having fun NOW!!!
Nancy
this is awsome love itÂ
THANK YOU!!!!
Art, be it written or visual is,to me, a mirror to society and in this , your poetry has served as a witness that love (this privilege that we  possess) truly has no sight,culture or norms it only has belief and strength. its so beautiful how you captured this.Â
this to me is love in written form. #well done
Anthony- You are so right, that is exactly how I believe, no coler or culture takes preference of a real connection or love, one of my favorite movies is "To Sir With Love".
Thank you.
Nancy
well deserved win nancy well done  tina x
Thanks so much Tina!!!
Best to you always
Nancy
Unique piece of work.
Thank you Ravindra, I appreciate it!
Nancy
Great poem, congrats.
Miche- Thanks!
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brilliant poem Nancy congrats x
Susan- THANKS SO MUCH!!!!
Nancy
Congrats, lovely poem.Â
Thanks Louise
Well deserved, im very proud of you.. Continue with what you do when it comes to writing.. You have a talent and a desire that should take you beyond. Great job!
Oh! I have tears in my eyes, that makes me feel so good.
Thanks for your inspiration, and your poetry is an inspiration to me, and I am sure others.
Have a Great Day!
Nancy