Poem -
Desire Of The Flesh
If a sexy woman doesn't turn your crank
Best they check you for a pulse
Had to actually look in another direction
Was becoming totally engulfed
Tried real hard to shield my eyes
She almost popped out of the screen
My wife was sitting there right beside me
Had to muffle my tiny screams
You must be thinking, “typical male”
Only one damn thing on my mind
But I'm looking at her for artistic merit
She's got a real cute behind
My pulse is racing a mile a minute
Nothing to do with affection
It's over the top “desire of the flesh”
Bet I have a reddish complexion
If a sexy babe doesn't turn your crank
Best they check you for a pulse!
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Comments
Friggin' BRILLIANT poetic honesty!!......you have some unbelievably perfect phrases wihin this most clever write!! ~
~ "It's over the top 'desire of the flesh'
But I have a reddish complexion....."
Those two phrases together speak volumes!!....It is such a brilliant coupling of word choices that it lends truly powerful Merit to the whole of the poem itself!!.......I could go on & on here but please ~ 'suffice it to say' !!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......a fantastic write SIR ELLISON!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴? Wow! & BRAVO!! ???
Well, Tony my good friend, this is totally unexpected! I was having second thoughts about whether I made a mistake posting this one because of how it would be perceived! As usual, you, my friend, make me feel like a real poet!!! Sometimes I feel like that my submissions are the ravings of an old man who hasn't accepted reality! Well methinks you, my friend, are far too complimentary but I thank you, kind sir, AGAIN!!! Cheers and good thoughts, Mr.T Love and hugs, Happy Jack xx