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Tony Taylor

Hey VAL!!.........write it, before you bite it!! ( that's just me!)...........love the format of this..........well done sister girl!!............smiles............T  xx

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Tony! Thank you for reading...I just took out the last line because I realized it isn't true. I know I have a reason to live.

All the rest of it is true though!! It's just one of those days where every symptom is horrible all at once so I tried writing to take my mind off of it...

Love,

Val <3

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Ricardo Antonio...

A little thought coming your way ... 

http://cosmofunnel.com/poems/clown-eleven-ice-age-shower-55498

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Ricardo! From the bottom of my heart I want to thank you! I love it!

Val <3

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Ricardo Antonio...

Well anything I can do to help with consciousness ... love you back!

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norman hardwich

I feel like this some days not nice. Great poem though ;-) 

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Norman! I'm sorry some days you feel like this. It's definitely not a good feeling! Thank you for reading!

Much Love

Val ♥️

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norman hardwich

Thank you Valerie i have found ways to cheer myself out of these feelings by just doing simple things like walking the dog ;-) he always takes me for a walk he is a Boer bull a monster of a dog with a heart of a little puppy :-) or get stuck into a painting. Life is one big drama and I hate drama's I'm a cartoon kinda guy :-) he he. You are a very nice person Val xxhugs and much love to you too lovely ladyxx

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you. You are very sweet! I'm happy you found certain things to help you relieve the stress on the days you feel this way. That is great advice!!

With Love,

Val ♥️

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