Devils Advocate
They danced all day
To the sound of the rain
He ignited her soul
Like a spark to a flame
Arms round her waist
Embracing her tight
In a blink of an eye
Day became night
For a moment in time
Mind in abyss
Senses departing
She succumbed to his kiss
He nuzzled her neck
Stroking her back
Her guard crumbled
Her resistance did lack
She sold her soul to the devil that night
As thunder crashed the walls
Heaven in her grasp
As she began to fall
Lost in pure emotion
She let him take her all
Insides churned
Excitement builds
Her body ached to be fulfilled
With animal grace
He took his prize
Lightening flashed before her eyes
Fire seared her veins
Her virtue drained
Innocent no more
Adonis now victorious
She lay spent on the floor
She sold her soul to the devil that night
As thunder crashed the walls
Heaven in her grasp
As she began to fall
Lost in pure emotion
She let him take her all
copywritten@susanworrall/2014
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Hey Susan!!.......this is great girlfriend!!.........I love the way you lit this up with all the onomatopoeia!!..........made the whole thing come alive.........great word choices..........and beautiful flow..........great read my friend...........well done...........smiles............T xx
Thanks T glad you like it. Comments like this let me know I'm doing something right x