Poem -
Didn't consent
you didn't think I'd recallΒ
anything at all
all the pain you caused
has my life paused
if only you could see
how much you affected me
you have me wishing my life away
why would I choose to stay
I'll never be the sameΒ
because now I'm filled with shame
you wanted to feel sadisfaction threw the wrong actionsΒ
no one heard my screams
that night replays in my dreams
i hope you feel lots of resent
becauseΒ I never gave you consentΒ
one day you will do the timeΒ
for you have committed a huge crime.
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Wow this is a powerful piece.
Oh My Goodness!!... ..I am praying fight now that this is a fictional narrative.......becausebif it's not........ there's a crime that needs to be reported........ otherwise this is a VERY powerful write!!.......a fantastic narrative........ with stunning imagery and phrasing that moves the reader!!........angreat sense of rhythm and timing in the delivery as well!........ you're a talented poet Elizabeth Thompson........ALL STARS!!!..... truly compelling piece!!........ well done...... and......... WELCOME to COSMO!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?
Thank you I feel noticed and special u made my night but sadly no this is a true story it happend to me last JulyΒ
Hello Elizabeth...
Welcome to Cosmo!Β
I hope he is brought to justice...
Thank you for sharing this horrific trauma that you went through...
I hope you don't blame yourself and I hope this guy is off the streets...
I am very sorry this happened to you...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Dear Elizabeth,
The sooner this monster is behind bars, the better. Β But please, do not let his cowardly acts ruin your beautiful life. Β No shame, erase the memory of his beastiality. Β Rise above the anguish of your memories. Β Seek the payment for his crime, then, replace the hurt in your eyes with a smiling face, that you still will meet the soulmate of your dreams. Β Powerful write. Β Welcome to Cosmo.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Wow this is an amazing poem you better win the contest lol because your poem is beautiful but sad I'm sorry this had to happen to you though -CoryΒ