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Died....

Died....

and so it happened this noon 
my worst fear has come true 
dreaming of you by a full moon
this rawness was truly new 

i saw you… with her and happy
even the sky was a cheerful blue
perhaps i sound quite sappy 
my love for you is taboo

a heart broke in two just like that 
i was doomed in blood and pain
suddenly my heart rate was flat 
nothing left for me to gain

but that is nothing new
you stabbed and stabbed each day 
and i didn’t have the slightest clue
then slowly my life became grey

till i was almost certainly dead
your laugh oh that laugh… was my curse
loved until the very end, until i bled 
your praise made everything worse

perhaps a curse of the mind too 
i have love oh just a little to hard
it all inside me slowly grew
burry me in an old churchyard  

i loved and loved till i died 
you have killed my little soul 
to you i have always lied
that’s what left in my heart a hole

thorn my wings and let them burn
oh you, a devil with angels looks
perhaps some day roles will turn 
our story will never end in books

so sweet to see, so cruel to love
you have killed me many moons ago
are you a raven or a dove…
i am lost in darkness, i do not know

that devil-may-care hair and glistening eyes
what woman could deny your charm
did you ever hear my sorrowful cries 
how have i not heard the alarm

i have loved and loved….
then i died

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Dean Kuch

I'm a bit confused by the following lines, K...

and so it happened this noon 
my worst fear has come true 
dreaming of you by a full moon
this rawness was truly new 
 

How was there a full moon if it was noon?
How about considering (for clarity's sake):

so it happened just past noon 
my worst fear has come true 
dreaming of you in this monsoon
such rawness was truly new 

Merely a suggestion that you may do with what you wish.
Perhaps you have a good explanation why the full moon would be present at noon so I'm merely beating my head against the proverbial wall.
Or, maybe, as I suspect, you simply needed a word that rhymed with moon and noon?
In any event, there's nothing that hurts worse than unrequited love.
~Dean ~ ♥?♥ ~

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Whispering Dream

Oh yes indeed nothing hurts more... nothing. 

I do have a reason for such a paradox, it is simply because you can see the moon in the sky during the day at times and this happened to be one of those times. It was beautifully out of place, just like my love was. 

Thank you for your lovely comment, Hugs K.

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Dean Kuch

Got ya, thanks for clarifying that.
I've never seen the full moon at noon here where I live. The sun's too high in the sky.
I have seen the moon during impending twilight, while there was still quite a bit of daylight left, however.
Hugs,
~Dean ☼⋆⋆☽

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Whispering Dream

Here in Ireland its quite normal :) and you're welcome :) 
Hugs K.

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Dean Kuch

I'm moving to Ireland then.
I hear Dublin's nice, lol...
~Dean

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