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Dismantled

Open my eyes 
with wishes of seeing you
Tunnel vision got me blinded 
my vision picturing two
stuck on the images...
Imagination just fooling me
i know you’re really gone
but it’s still confusing me.
look what you’ve done
these feelings I can’t handle.
i want to scream, cry, and kill!
My emotions dismantled.
my hearts past broken 
my feelings past numb
but I could never hate you
because I’ll always love you some. - Juone 

 

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Simon Bromley

very well written.  I enjoyed your rhyme scheme and felt the words you were describing.  well done

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