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Premature Dismount

Premature Dismount

An image of relational grace,
vaulting toward a perfect 10...
then plummeting to the floor
bouncing up & back down again.

A couple well out of balance,
tiptoeing across life's narrow beam,
a seeming exercise of futility
living out the initial dream.

Both watching for faulty moves
and keeping an unhealthy score;
realization creeping steadily in...
no future is left in store.

Finally throwing up arms in surrender,
enough drinking from this poisonous fount,
now ending this broken routine for good
with a premature dismount.

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks for the feedback!  My daughter just started gymnastics, so the concept of a relationship in gymnastic terms popped into my head.  Simple Bliss is a stronger piece but I had fun with this one.  Thx again!*!*!

Jacki

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Larry Ran

My Dear Jackie,

Your lovely poem makes me want to do crazy things.

Like take a running "vault", and do a double flip.

Like riding a "horse" bareback.

Like instead of writing these words, to "ring" you up.

I am "beaming" all over.

I am so happy, that I'm going out for a drink at the "Parallel Bar".

Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Jacki Goebel

I'm laughing Larry!  Good ones!!  My hubby and I have a great time with puns/plays on words.  Appreciate the feedback!  Thanks for visiting my work.

Blessings!*!*!

Jacki

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