Poem - 19 August 2024, 23:35 Dissent Neville He was once, so very beautiful and he meant so very much .. Though she kept him at a distance and yet, despite her hunger .. She denied them both and sadly, did not dare to touch .. Like 4 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 577 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Distance Fear Waiting Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Reality Listed in: Contest Entries 9 comments
sparrowsong20 August 2024, 17:23 Hello Nev... Try again... Maybe, she didn't see the door... Confusion happens when it's not specific... 😳 Great write! Thank you for sharing... sparrowsong Reply
Neville21 August 2024, 00:16 I think there was more than an element of schizophrenogenic mother about the wee lass .. Reply
Bernadete van d...20 August 2024, 18:07 Oh dear! What were you up to Neville? Stay well mate. B Reply
Neville21 August 2024, 00:11 Absolutely nothing, she said she loved me like a brother, but then she went & screwed my brother .. Reply
Neville21 August 2024, 00:15 I think there was more than an element of schizophrenogenic mother about the wee lass .. Reply
Bernadete van d...21 August 2024, 00:16 Oh, this really sucks! Whatever happened, don't ever stop loving your brother. I hope you don't. Reply
Neville21 August 2024, 22:48 It feels like you got it Tina .. many huge thanks for stopping by x Reply
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Hello Nev...
Try again...
Maybe, she didn't see the door...
Confusion happens when it's not specific...
😳
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
I think there was more than an element of schizophrenogenic mother about the wee lass ..
Oh dear! What were you up to Neville? Stay well mate. B
Absolutely nothing, she said she loved me like a brother, but then she went & screwed my brother ..
I think there was more than an element of schizophrenogenic mother about the wee lass ..
Oh, this really sucks! Whatever happened, don't ever stop loving your brother.
I hope you don't.
I never shall, thanks B
💔 How scarred we all are 💔 xx
It feels like you got it Tina .. many huge thanks for stopping by x